***PART 3 fixed, thanks bro. I should probably do something like triple-check these before i post them online, try n be more professional or something. lol!
part 4 has been edited.
I'm currently constucting the next story, which if i do it right, could be a book.
lol.
me, writing a book.
it could be done....i could do it.
I got some more pre-stuff, prologueish stuff i could put up before the major conflict. I was gonna introduce the villains of the main story during the main story, but i might be able to do another few background stories.
Hmmmm, i should go look up some sci-fi/fantasy publishers.... doo da doo
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'"I'm opaque?" he questioned out loud, not paying attention to the other ninja at the door anymore. He was definitely partially see through.'
opaque means "not clear"... =)
great stuff otherwise... good action, but i think the robot ninja could use more description... i'm saving part 4 for tomorrow...
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